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  1. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    GOOOD MORNING


    this topic is about hosting a member who will talk about him self in a paragraph or essay 200 words talking about him self
    the aim is to improve our writing skill

    our first guest will be smile



    p.s : please comment in English
     
  2. Sμilε

    Sμilε ¬°•| » نقـآء يسڪْننيّ|•°¬

    :lll-_-:


    OH MY Allah


    i felt like I'm in school

    never mind

    i'll try my best Fire :flex:


    thank you for the Invitation

     
  3. هيبة بدو

    هيبة بدو ¬°•| αѕєєян•εïз•αℓαмαℓ|•°¬


    Heaiba is a student in Qater Unverstiy. She is from Oman.She is 21 years old.She has a big family .She studied in the High School in ... .

    She likes many things as drowing by pincel in her note books. She likes reading Gilf stories in frie time.
    Also,She writes her actives in her notes that happen in her day.When she is sad ,she likes to be alone.
    She likes to chat with her friend in massenger .

    . In the other hand,She hates .....ng She scares from snakes.

    Sorry i try to write more than but
    i like to bagin with thes short eassy
    plase write comments about my eassy
     
  4. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    ^^

    nice way to begin it

    i might cancel the topic cuz writing 200 words is like a living hell

    to some people

    try to bring the sentences togather in order to form a nice paragraph


    an essay is formed for the combination of paragraphs

    at least 3 or 4 paragraphs


    but i like what u ve written keep going

    ^^
     
  5. Sμilε

    Sμilε ¬°•| » نقـآء يسڪْننيّ|•°¬

    Once upon time Smile went on trip to Dubai. She was decided to spend her weekend in discovering new placeless that she never visited. She went with her family to Dubai Marina (The Walk) . Z

    The experience was incredible to visit such new place. At the first place you will think that you are in foreign country building designs, the people, the coffee shops even the cars parking all things give an impression that you are not in the Gulf. Z

    The most thing smile admire was the street actors those who play different characters and wearing strange clothes belong to pass ages. People stop by to take photos and to enjoy different shows or listen to music. There are many shops for famous brand names also more than five, five star hotel you can chose whatever you like to get some relaxation. Z

    Smile gets the dinner and she celebrates her birthday with her Family in one of the Walk restaurant. The returned back home after they spend their lovely time together and they decided to visit the place over and over again. Z

    End of the story

    Hope you like it and enjoy it and I apologize for the grammatical mistakes :)
     
    آخر تعديل: ‏22 فبراير 2011
  6. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    no vital grammer mistakes yet there are someLESS words which u wrote
    but i like what u wrote good story i felt like i visited dubai
     
  7. شعشبونه

    شعشبونه ¬°•|Her Highness|•°¬

    my life story
    one day, ....
    then ...
    at the end ...

    done~ XD
    :0962b59e9642d670ff5
    I hope that every one like it
    :bleh:
     
  8. مـريم

    مـريم ¬°•| حظ عينيـے لو تشوفگ گل يوم |•°¬

    i like what u do in this section it is interesting and we can get benefit
    in fact i have many paragraph to write in my portfolio and no problem to write hear ^^

    my name is mariam .
    I live in Alain and i'am now studying in alburaimi university .i hope to get high score to finish the foundation program this year
    my routine is very unorganized in this time and i feel tired because of long hour working
    I weak up early at 6 and i return to home 4 but some time i get out in 2 and leave my class
    When some one ask me what you do in your leisure time i just say sleeping and set on the internet for a long time
    sometime in the week end i like to cook especially cub cake also i like to read magazine
    I'm obsessed with download programs in my PC i really like to try every thing but that make me crazy because i don't know a lot of protection programs and the best one

    my mood is very volatile but i control myself very well i dont get angry
    quickly i like to have fun with the people . Most of time i am quiet


    That's it
    I hope you like my writing:afkr:
     
    آخر تعديل: ‏1 أبريل 2011
  9. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    i dont have to tell you what to do

    easy


    write a paragraph
     
  10. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    i dont have to tell you what to do

    easy


    write a paragraph
     
  11. جذور الوفاء

    جذور الوفاء ¬°•| عضو مبتدى |•°¬

    In fact, nice subject that we can write what we want and writing help us to be creative when we want to express our feeiling . But we need rules to follow which make our essay organize..
    I will write and i will send it
    thanx too much:imuae69:
     
  12. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    i ll be waiting
     
  13. عذب الأطباع

    عذب الأطباع ¬°•| عضو مبتدى |•°¬

    First of all ... I want to thank you for this great idia
    I think it will be good for those who want to improve their writing skill, and for those who want to learn some new vocab. However,I'm really impressed with it,and Ihope to see more

    By the way, count me on
    With respect
     
  14. DarkFireSlash

    DarkFireSlash ¬°•|مٌفكِر وُمبِدع تطوِري |•°¬

    i am waiting


    this topic now is open for everyone to put his essay
     
  15. الهاجس

    الهاجس ¬°•| حكاية تميز |•°¬

    DarkFireSlash


    I liked topic a lot
    I hope everyone will benefit from it in order 2 improve the English language, but the best first thing that any member involved likes to write his blog
    To an external page and audited before it is put in the forum, this result feel it is the best 2 improve the skill more ..

    I thank u
     
  16. العيوز عتيجه

    العيوز عتيجه ¬°•| عضو مبتدى |•°¬

    You have mistakes in spelling words
     
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